NATIONAL POETRY MONTH AND EARTH DAY
TRYING MY HAND AT HAIKU
Signs of awakened Spring
In trees tinged with pink purple hues
Wraith boughs-winter begone.
I have been celebrating National Poetry Month with poems reminding us of our brutal, horrific and long-lasting winter and the long-awaited advent of a dramatic spring. You can find poems and lines by T.S.Eliot, D.H. Lawrence, Emily Dickinson, Ralph Waldo Emerson, Albert Camus William Wordsworth, Rachel France (Haiku) and by yours truly
(Signs of Awakened Spring, Haiku).
Click here to see my Twitter Poetry Selection.
Click here to read my blog introducing National Poetry Month.
So what is a
Haiku poem and why did I choose this form?
Haiku is a traditional form of Japanese poetry consisting of three lines of verse.
The first line usually has 5 syllables, the second has 7 and the third has 3.
The message is strongly visual and concise.
The reason I favor this form of poetic expression is because it is conducive to twitter's maximum of 140 characters including a four color photo . And most important, "brevity is the soul of wit." (Shakespeare's
Hamlet )
Why convey a message in over 40,000 lines of verse (the approximate length of Dante's
Inferno) when you can convey a strong message in three lines?
Won't your reader be more amenable to reading and understanding your poem, especially with a graphic?
The reason I wrote my above Haiku is simple.
As I was driving in my neighborhood on a recent, rainy and dreary day, an amazing scene caught my attention. I was surrounded by stark skeletal wraith-like arms of trees soaring into the darkened skies.
Lo and behold, right before me were purple pink budding leaves of a magnolia tree 'firing' into life. It was a REBIRTH OF SPRING.
I pulled out my i- phone and quickly captured the scene. The event inspired me to translate this heightened experience into a Haiku. A simple, dramatic, sensual visual event-- instantaneously perceived--became the basis of the Haiku.
So, perhaps my reader will share my sense of wonder and amazement of spring's late--but dramatic- arrival expressed in the Haiku.
Enjoy, the ceaseless cycle of the seasons, especially today
Earth Day.
Late Spring:wraith-like boughs
contrasted with burgeoning pink buds
Click here for my homage today-- EARTH DAY-- to the poignant photography of the environmentalist and photographer Ansel Adams. He died this day, April 22, in 1984.